Script To Screen: “Ghostbusters”
The Stay Puft Marshmallow Man scene.
The Stay Puft Marshmallow Man scene.
From the 1984 movie Ghostbusters, written by Dan Aykroyd & Harold Ramis, the Final Struggle.
Setup: Gozer commands the three Ghostbusters to choose their form of destruction and despite trying to keep their minds blank, Stantz has a brain fart, resulting in this:


Here is the scene from the movie:
Clearly, a lot of ad libbing in the scene including Venkman’s line: “Nobody steps on a church in my town!”
One of the single best things you can do to learn the craft of screenwriting is to read the script while watching the movie. After all a screenplay is a blueprint to make a movie and it’s that magic of what happens between printed page and final print that can inform how you approach writing scenes. That is the purpose of Script to Screen, a Go Into The Story series where we analyze a memorable movie scene and the script pages that inspired it.
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