Script Analysis: ‘Sound of Metal’ — Part 2: Plot

Read the script for this award-winning drama set in the world heavy metal music.

Reading scripts. Absolutely critical to learn the craft of screenwriting. The focus of this bi-weekly series is a deep structural and thematic analysis of each script we read. Our daily schedule:

Monday: Scene-By-Scene Breakdown
Tuesday: Plot
Wednesday: Characters
Thursday: Themes
Friday: Dialogue
Saturday: Takeaways

Today: Plot.

In every scene, something happens. A plot point is a scene or group of scenes in which something major happens, an event that impacts the narrative causing it to turn in a new direction.

A relevant anecdote. Years ago, I was on the phone with a writer discussing a script project. My son Will, who was about four years old at the time, must have been listening to me talking about “plot points” during the conversation because after I hung up, he asked, “Daddy, what’s a plop point?”

That’s in effect what a plot point is. It’s an event that ‘plops’ into the narrative and changes its course. So when you think Plot Point, think Plop Point!

The value of this exercise:

• To identify the backbone of the story structure.
• To examine each major plot point and see how it is effective as an individual event.
• To analyze the major plot points in aggregate to determine why they work together as the central plot.

This week: Sound of Metal. You may download the script here.

Screenplay by Darius Marder & Abraham Marder, story by Darius Marder & Derek Cianfrance.

Plot Summary: A heavy-metal drummer’s life is thrown into freefall when he begins to lose his hearing.

Writing Exercise: Go through the scene-by-scene breakdown of Sound of Metal and identify the major plot points. Post your thoughts in comments and we’ll see if we can come up with a consensus.

Major kudos to Laura Bolton for doing this week’s scene-by-scene breakdown.

To download a PDF of the breakdown for Sound of Metal, go here.

A scene from the movie:

For Part 1, to read the Scene-By-Scene Breakdown discussion, go here.

To access over 90 analyses of previous movie scripts we have read and discussed at Go Into The Story, go here.

I hope to see you in the RESPONSE section about this week’s script: Sound of Metal.