Page One: “Annette” (2021)

Original story by Ron Mael & Russell Mael

The movie version of the opening:

So, I know what you’re thinking: Hey, can I write a script with this approach to format and style? In my humble opinion, you should feel free to write your screenplay any damn way you feel is necessary to best convey your story. Granted, it’s an easier sell if the writers are Ron and Russell Mael (Sparks) and the project is to be directed by Leos Carax (Holy Motors). If the writer is a first-timer (in terms of Hollywood), that will likely be a tougher sell as many folks on the development side of things tend to hew more closely to a conventional approach to screenwriting: structure, characters, style and format.

But again, if what you have in mind is the best way … indeed, the ONLY way to tell your story … and your story totally rocks … I think you have to act in the belief someone who has the power to say Yes will “get” your story.

Caveat: The path of least resistance will almost always be a conventional approach to style, format, and story structure.

You may read the screenplay here.

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Page One is a daily Go Into The Story series featuring the first page of notable movie scripts from the classic era to contemporary times. Comparing them is an excellent way to study a variety of writing styles and see how professional writers start a story.

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