Gary, you did a magnificent job with your breakdown.
I agree the story has more of a four-act structure. Look forward to cracking that open in Part 2: Plot.
Gary, you did a magnificent job with your breakdown. Not only just nailing down each scene and sequence, but providing some flavor to the description. Plus, your analysis re plotline points, pinches, etc. Good stuff. Thanks!
I agree the story has more of a four-act structure. Look forward to cracking that open in Part 2: Plot.