A Story Idea Each Day for a Month — Day 23
This is the 15th year in a row I’ve run this series in April. Why a story idea each day for the month? Because the best way to come up with…
This is the 15th year in a row I’ve run this series in April. Why a story idea each day for the month? Because the best way to come up with a great story idea is to come up with a lot of ideas. And the best way to come up with a lot of ideas is to be proactive in sourcing story ideas.
Today’s story: “How a Man in Prison Stole Millions from Billionaires.”
Arthur Cofield probably stole more money from behind bars than any inmate in American history. His methods were fairly straightforward, if distinctly contemporary: using cell phones that he’d had smuggled into prison, and relying on a network of people on the outside, he accessed the bank accounts of the very wealthy, then used their money to make large purchases — often of gold, which he’d typically have shipped to Atlanta, where it was picked up by his accomplices. Some of that gold he seems to have converted to cash: he and his associates bought cars, houses, and clothes, and they flaunted all of it on social media. (At one point, Cofield wrote on Instagram, “Making millions from bed.”) By the time Cofield was charged — with identity theft and money laundering, among other crimes — he had likely stolen at least fifteen million dollars. “I don’t know of anything that’s ever happened in an institutional setting of this magnitude,” Brenda Smith, a law professor at American University who has researched crime in prison, told me. Cofield, she said, was “something of an innovator.”
I’m seeing this as The Shawshank Redemption meets The Wolf of Wall Street. A group of convicts toiling away their time day after endless day. Enter a new prisoner. Let’s call him Jordan. Busted for a series of financial crimes.
Using smuggled cell phones, the personalities and accents of other prisoners, and — once the money from their scams rolls in — bribes to the prison warden and all the prison guards, Jordan creates a money-making syndicate.
He has a rationale: “Why are there billionaires? They have no reason to exist and most of ’em are rich ‘coz they inherited their money. Besides, a couple million here, a couple million there … who’s gonna notice?”
They transform prison life into a corporate party zone with the warden, guards, and prisoners all making a shit ton of money.
But as the Bible says, “The love of money is the root of all evil.”
Folks want more. They get jealous of cash disbursements. And the prisoners have a way of dealing with their grievances … whacking others.
That’s the setup.
There you go. My 23rd story this month. Free for you to take and write.
Previous articles in this year’s series:
Day 1
Day 2
Day 3
Day 4
Day 5
Day 6
Day 7
Day 8
Day 9
Day 10
Day 11
Day 12
Day 13
Day 14
Day 15
Day 16
Day 17
Day 18
Day 19
Day 20
Day 21
Day 22
Each day in April, I invite you to join me in comments to do some brainstorming. Take each day’s story idea and see what it can become when we play around with it. These are valuable skills for a writer to develop.
See you in RESPONSES to hear YOUR take on this story idea.
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Come back tomorrow for another Story Idea Each Day For A Month.